A Better Pitch for Pasthel
A Better Pitch for Pasthel
I got some really good feedback after launcing my game. One that stuck out to me was, "I really liked your game but it felt a bit like a gamble. I had no clue what it was about based on your itch page." And they were right! My itch page was too vague and my downloads reflected this (not that I expected a ton of downloads to begin with). So, I decided to give the Pasthel page a bit of a facelift.
^Old page was vague. There was a lot of screenshot on the side but not a ton in the description. They were also kind of just "random" screenshots that told you nothing about the game or tone.
^New page. I included some art that I think better exhibits the "vibes" of the game as well as a longer description explaining what the game is actually about.
I also updated the icon to be more appealing.
I feel a little silly because this all seems obvious now. I wrote this in the journal I keep for Pasthel back in 2022.
It reads "started making the house [...]. I'm happy with my progress even though I don't know what I'm doing." I still feel this way. I still don't know what I'm doing but I'm passionate about this so I'm going to learn .
Pasthel Demo
An energy drink fueled RPG adventure!
Status | Released |
Author | TheLloydVoid |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | 2D, Dating Sim, Horror, LGBT, No AI, pastel, Pixel Art, Retro, Turn-based |
Languages | English |
Accessibility | Subtitles |
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